"Are you ready Sarah" my brother Sam asked me As I put on my pink skates and my protective gear.
I struggle to get up and to move on the carpet. "Ow"I said as I fall on the ground. I stretch for the Pole and I find out it was Sams hand "want are you doing here Sam" I said " helping you they say I'm aloud to" sam said. After practising so long I finally learned to skate then it was time to go.
I love how you hooked us into your writing using dialogue. Using words like stretch are really descriptive as well. Awesome.
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What words could you use instead of said??
I agree.
DeleteHi this is Maddie from the USA. It is so cool that you are skating! I actually skate myself. Do you take lessons or did you just learn. I have been taking lessons since I was in 1st grade. My family is really in to hockey so I just wanted to take lessons. I have tons of fun skating with my family. Awesome post!
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